I've been tweaking this scene last night after the meeting and it's going really well I think. It's a lot more smoother and I've taken the jumps out, especially at the very beginning of part one where he walks to the postcard stand....
This is an additional part we all agreed on that he should look a the postcard and slightly rub his thumbs on the postcard to sort of indicate that he's home sick and misses his house... i quite like this.
and this is the last part of the scene where he walks away sad with the postcard in his hand....
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